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Entering a new place
Wondering if you’ll be excepted
Or just cast away in a shadow
That leads to another room

Messages emerge out of nothing
Right before your eyes as you gaze at the screen
Grey swirls of words, meaningless and meaningful
Attract your wondering eyes

Everyone is different here
Just like you
Wanting to be noticed,
To be watched
To be known in our world
Yet they are not
No matter how many times they attempt it

So take the hands of the many
Of the friends of this place
We want to see the unseen
The unseen artists of the world

Feel welcome here and show us your all!
And we’ll show you our own
We shall not shun you forth
But draw you into the warmth
:iconkahea-wolfess:
Well this is kinda about the chat at and it's for the club itself. I just began to think about how this place is so nice and amazing to let the unseen be seen... And thus this escaped my mind.
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:iconxilamne:
first stanza, second line "excepted" should be "accepted".

A good bit though. Well written, and much appreciated
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:iconunseenartists:
This is a beautiful poem! Thank you so much ^__^ :hug:
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:iconotakuwolf:
~Otakuwolf Jun 11, 2006  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Original the idea about a poetry for a club... I'm shure oneday you'll recive a ton of watches and wiews :D :D :D !!!
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:iconbeyondearth:
Thank you very much, this is wonderful. Otaku would be very pleased. Thanks for the great poem, Kahea
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:iconandared:
You got it exactly right!
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:iconkahea-wolfess:
Yeah and I wrote it in under ten mins.. XD I was hoping I got it right.
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